A typical chatbot rewrite
“Spearheaded comprehensive due diligence across diverse consumer and healthcare transactions, leveraging strong analytical skills to drive value.”
It sounds bigger. There’s still no deal, no size and nothing you produced, and words like “spearheaded” and “leveraging” now read as AI-written to a lot of screeners.
Eight Second CVBanking · Deal experience · High
Which deal, and how big? A banker reads this line to see whether you could do the analyst job, and it doesn’t tell them.
What a bank screener looks for hereA named deal, its size, and what you produced
Name one transaction, give its size, and say what you built for it.
RewriteBuilt the [five-year revenue model] for a [£__m] healthcare acquisition
We push back: what was the biggest deal you worked on, and what did you hand over at the end of it?
Being a member isn’t leadership, and McKinsey drops CVs with no clear example of it. If you held any role, name it and say what happened because of you.